Rough cut -evaluation

Acting upon feedback from our teachers and after careful analysis we have decided that we need to include more close ups and so as a result we must go filming again. We were advised to include more shots of the child actress in order for the audience to be able to establish a relationship with her. We were also advised to get more shots of the pond to enforce a connection between the pond and the tittle as our film is entitled 'hollow pond'. Further feedback given was that our running shots need to have more pace and we need to look more frightened. Additionally we were also told to cut out the shot where me and Alex are hiding as we do not look frightened enough and it does not portray the message of terror that we were trying to convey.

In response to the feedback given we will film on Tuesday 30th after college.