Rough Cut Commentary

We completed our rough cut on Wednesday 24th March. After receiving both negative and positive feedback, we decided to make it constructive and act upon it.

The majority our feedback was good, but we were told we needed more close ups to make our film more effective. Both of our teachers agreed that Kyla was the strongest character, however we needed to have more shots if us in order to introduce us.

We were also told that the clip of me running was not convincing as i didn't look scared enough.

Therefore, we decide that we are going to film on Tuesday 30th March.